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@theletterf theletterf commented Nov 17, 2025

Proposal to fix #3611. This is a fully experimental draft to explore ways of composing the requested content.


LLM usage disclosure: I fed the issues description from #3611 to Claude 4.5 Sonnet in Cursor, then reviewed the content manually and fixed Vale linting issues. I also ran the docs through the Elasticsearch experimental MCP server to check for consistency and accuracy.

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deploy-manage/deploy/_snippets/trial-limitations.md 9 Elastic.FutureTense 'will inform' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
deploy-manage/deploy/_snippets/trial-limitations.md 9 Elastic.Wordiness Consider using 'tell' instead of 'inform'.
deploy-manage/deploy/_snippets/trial-limitations.md 18 Elastic.FutureTense 'will inform' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
deploy-manage/deploy/_snippets/trial-limitations.md 18 Elastic.Wordiness Consider using 'tell' instead of 'inform'.
get-started/evaluate-elastic.md 89 Elastic.FutureTense 'will serve' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
get-started/evaluate-elastic.md 110 Elastic.FutureTense 'will evaluate' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
get-started/evaluate-elastic.md 166 Elastic.WordChoice Consider using 'efficient' instead of 'simple', unless the term is in the UI.
get-started/evaluate-elastic.md 223 Elastic.FutureTense 'will your' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
get-started/evaluate-elastic.md 224 Elastic.FutureTense 'will need' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
get-started/index.md 28 Elastic.FutureTense 'we'll walk' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
get-started/index.md 28 Elastic.FutureTense 'You'll get' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.
get-started/index.md 30 Elastic.FutureTense 'You'll also' might be in future tense. Write in the present tense to describe the state of the product as it is now.

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@lcawl @jmikell821 Please have another look — thanks!

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I think this is a great evolution over the previous content. Added some comments and questions...

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quickly hopped in with a couple of ideas

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- Consider adding complementary solutions (for example, Observability + Security).
- Expand data sources and integrations.
- Implement advanced features (ML, custom applications, APIs).
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consider some helpful links here

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Any suggestion? I'd like to keep the list short

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just links on these bullet points so people can understand how do do these recommended actions

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lcawl commented Dec 1, 2025

I moved the "Remove limitations" section of https://www.elastic.co/docs/deploy-manage/deploy/elastic-cloud/create-an-organization out of the snippet, since it says you ought to do those subscription steps only after your trial is complete (and thus doesn't really fit in the flow of the new trial-specific page). I also moved it to a separate section in the original page, to align with the flow there as well (and enable other pages to link to it, if needed).

I also combined the two bullet points about Elasticsearch serverless setting limitations (and added a link for more information).

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Create a “Get Started with Elastic” tutorial to guide users through their trial experience

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